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Post by Robin Hood on Sat 10 Sep - 23:19

So the game starts off EXACTLY the same as Ozmafia except that she bumps into Scarlet instead of Caramia and Kyrie. Anyways here's my crummy translation. Though it'll give you an idea of what went on XD

???
"wait"
Girl
"!"
She was pulled over by a strong force which shook her
Someone had grabbed her arm
With a bit of hesitation, she shook the her arm free. 'Wait' the voice came again
Girl
"﹒﹒﹒"
Fearfully she raised her eyes
Girl
"Aa..."
Her eyes met with a boy of small stature clothed in a deep red hood.
???
"I don't know where you're headed but don't run on the main street."
???
"Did someone hit you? Have you been injured?"
Girl
"Sorry, I..."
Silver Haired Man
"...I caught you!"
Girl
"!"
Silver Haired Man
"Prey, Did you think you could escape from me?"
Silver Haired Man
"Come to me, Let me feast on your life."
???
"Ceasar... why are you here?"
Girl
"...Was that,
Was that this man's name?"
???
"eh"
He inclined his head at the girl's question
???
"It is. This is Ceasar an outlaw who lives outside in the forest."
???
"You... Were you not aware of the name of the party pursuing you?"
Girl
"It seems that way."
???
"It seems that way? huu"
Ceasar
"What does it matter?"
Ceasar
"Shorty, If you don't want me to kill you, hand over the woman."
Scarlet
"Don't call me Shorty.
I have a name; It's Scarlet."
Girl
"Mr. Scarlet."
Scarlet
"Yes, that's my name."
Scarlet
"You are.... no, before that"
Scarlet
"Leave, Ceasar.
You're in the Grimm Family territory.
You may not interfere here."
Ceasar
"hmph. Do you think I'm going to be silent and do what you say?"
Ceasar
"A weak bastard like you, Killing you would be easy."
Scarlet
"In the forest, that might be so,
But this is our territory
...Even if I fall someone from my family will kill you."
Scarlet
"Still I... Don't intend to be defeated so easily."
Scarlet
(gun clicking) "Last warning Caesar! Leave."
Ceasar
"Tch."
Ceasar
"Remember prey; I will be the one to cut your throat."
Girl
"Ah..."
Scarlet
"He left, huh?"
Girl
"A- Are we safe now?"
Scarlet
sigh
Scarlet
...
Girl
"Um, Mr.Scarlet?"
In the conversation, he uttered a word like a name *Possibly! This line was really hard XD
Then 'Scarlet' came to his senses
Scarlet
"Ah, My apologies."
He put his gun back on his shoulder and looked at the girl.
Scarlet
"That guy is a little difficult to deal with,
To think we were able to drive him away without incident."
Scarlet
"No, This is fine, no sense it worrying about it."
Scarlet
"Although that Ceasar calling you prey.
What kind of relationship do you have with him?"
Girl
"Relationship..."
At Scarlet's question, the girl tilted her head.
She tried to retrieve the answer from her mind.
but found nothing.
Girl
"I don't know."
Girl
"I don't even know what kind of person that person is. I..."
Scarlet
"Really?"
Scarlet
"And you are?"
Girl
"eh"
Scarlet
"I don't know who you are,
But I want you to tell me yourself."
Girl
"I..."
Scarlet
"Yes. Your name and the Family you belong to."
Scarlet
"As for the way you are dressed, you don't look like your from the slums?"
Girl
"Slums...?"
Girl
I wonder what I should say...
She thought desperately, still completely confused.
Girl
Family, what on earth is that?
Girl
Is that a name...
Girl
My name...
Girl
"...I don't know."
Scarlet
"You don't know? What do you mean?"
Scarlet
"It's clear that you aren't part of the slum population.
In that case, it's my responsibility to back home to your family."
Girl
﹒﹒﹒
Scarlet
"Why are you silent?
Are you frightened?"
Scarlet
"If you are worried about a punishment I can request that they be lenient.
If you can just tell me where I need to take you"
Scarlet
"So can't you tell me yourself?"
Girl
"My, myself..."
No matter how many times he asks me. I still don't know.
I don't remember my name.
It isn't only my name.
All of my memories are in a haze. I don't know anything.
Girl
"I..."
Girl
(I don't know this town, I don't know this person.)
Girl
(I don't even know who 'I' am)
A wave of uneasiness from the center of her body outwards
permeating her body with a feeling of helplessness.
Girl
"I don't know. I..."
Girl
(I, who am I...)
Girl
...uh


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Post by Robin Hood on Tue 13 Sep - 6:49

———————————Fuka Faints———————————————————

( uh)
The world is utter darkness and silence.
(Now...)
The girl is certain she hears a sound and turns her head.
(is it my imagination...?)
Still, the darkness and silence are everywhere.
She can't even hear the sound of her own breathing.
"Oh, there it is again..."
Again she felt as though she could hear something.
The girl closes her eyelids and strains her ears.
(No. It isn't sound. It's--)
"It's someone's voice...?"
Girl
"n,nn"
She could feel clothes gently spread across her.
She seemed to be laid down somewhere.
???
"Oh, I think something has happened, Gretel."
Girl
"...?"
When she opened her eyes, someone was looking down upon the girl.
Not 'someone' to be precise.
But a cautious girl and a wide-eyed boy.
One with Doubt and one with curiosity the two caught the girl in their sights.
Gretel
"You're right... Something has happened."
Girl
"Ummm..."
Girl
(Who are they...)
Even upon waking, she still had no idea where she was.
Gretel
"How should we handle this Hansel? Do we kill it quickly?"
Girl
"!"
Hansel
"She hasn't even talked yet, isn't it too early to kill her?"
Gretel
"Really... This child will bring disaster.
It's a certainty."
Girl
"Disaster..."
Gretel
"My intuition tells me you're dangerous."
Hansel
"Is that so?
But there was no time to grab a bomb."
Gretel
"There is.
Therefore, we should bump her off right now."
Hansel
"If Gretel says we should go that far, then it's alright?"
Girl
"eeeek!"
Girl
(They are going to kill me...!)
(I thought I'd got escaped from the silver haired man.)
Girl
(I didn't even get to thank that person who helped me.)
Hansel
"Well then, I'll go report to Scarlet to come.
He'll be angry if we bump her off and don't tell him."
Girl
"!"
Girl
"Scarlet..."
Hansel
"huh?"
Girl
"Now, Scarlet..."
Scarlet
"...It's noisy in here."
Girl
"Ah!
Scarlet
"Are... Are you awake?"
Scarlet
"Hansel, Gretel.
I told you to tell me when she woke up."
Gretel.
"I made no such promises."
Scarlet
"Jeez."
Scarlet
"How are you feeling?"
Girl
"M, me?"
Scarlet
"Yes. You fainted suddenly. It caught me by surprise."
Scarlet approached the girl. He handed over a towel he was holding in his hand.
The towel was damp. It was cold and felt good against her skin.
Scarlet
"Have you figured out why Caesar was chasing you?"
Scarlet
"Your name? Or to the family to which you belong?"
Scarlet
"Even as I ask I see you have an expression similar to the one you had before
when you fainted."
Scarlet
These are simple questions that anyone should be able to answer.
Girl
"﹒﹒﹒"
Scarlet
"I am the Grimm Family caporegime, Scarlet."
Scarlet
"These two are the same. They are the caporegime, Hansel, and Gretel."
Girl
"Grimm Family...?"
Gretel
"You, How do you not even know the Mafia?"
Girl
"Mafia..."
Hansel
"We're like a team that looks after a division of town? Or group?
It's a great population, It makes me feel good." <-- Maybe Hansel is hard to translate T_T
Gretel
"In order to  live here, there is a minimum you need to know.
... You, you really don't understand anything?"
Girl
"Y, yeah. Nothing at all..."
Girl
"No matter how much I think about it. I don't understand."
Scarlet
"Could it be that you have memory loss?"
"The girl suddenly nods her head and Gretel clicked her tongue."
Gretel
"I thought so. She smells of trouble."
Gretel
"Scarlet. It would be better to kill this child."
Scarlet
"I will not allow it. I don't permit the killing of nonresistant company under our care."
Scarlet
"This also means the shedding of blood. So please stop."
Gretel
"... fine."
Scarlet
"Let me see... There are many things I'd like to know.
We'll settle them one by one."
Scarlet
"First one is ... your name."
Scarlet
"Your name is?"
Girl
"My..."
After a sigh, she muttered 'I don't know'
Hansel
"Eh? Are you serious? Don't know your name? Everyone should have some kind of name."
Gretel
"As Hansel says
You at least should remember what others used to call you."
Girl
"...I don't know. I don't remember any of it."
Girl
"Who I am, Where I am from?
Here, there?"
Girl
"Nothing. I know nothing at all."
Scarlet
"... Really"
Scarlet
"In that case, maybe you should consider a temporary name?"
Girl
"Temporary?"
Scarlet
"Yes. It would be difficult to call you without a name."
Scarlet
"Don't worry about it for now, until you remember,
You should consider choosing a name for the meantime."
Girl
"A name..."
The girl ponders the sudden proposal
Scarlet
Was it too sudden? Is it difficult?"
Scarlet
"...'homo sapiens'"
Girl
"eh!"
Gretel
"If it's difficult for you, I'll do it for you"
Gretel
"Homo sapiens. How's that for your name?"
Scarlet
"Gretel, That's not how I meant it."
Gretel
"I wonder? Isn't it better she take that as her name so people will understand it is "human"."
Hansel
"We could nickname her Hot-chan! I like it! It's settled!"
Scarlet
"Don't arbitrarily decide for her. It's her name."
Scarlet
"Don't worry about them.
Remember you could have this name for a while. So please consider your name."
Girl
"My name is...

Choose your name here
I went with the default.

Girl
"Fuka."
Girk
"Fuka. Is it okay?"
Scarlet
"It's good. It's the name you decided on.
I have no complaints"
Hansel
"I think it's good too. Do you like it too, Gretel?"
Gretel
"Doesn't matter to me."
Scarlet
"Yeah. It seems like there's no problem."
Scarlet
"Well then,
Pleased to meet you, Fuka."
Gretel
"huh"
Gretel
"Just a minute Scarlet. What do you mean pleased to meet you."
Scarlet
"It's time.
She doesn't belong outside."
Gretel
"So she's just a part of this residence? NO! I absolutely object!"
Scarlet
"Gretel..."
Gretel
"Hansel, You agree too right?"
Hansel
"It's fine with me~."
"I don't feel like she's some violent criminal."
Scarlet
"In that case, I want you to agree too.
We can't just drive her out into the night."
Gretel
"What do you mean we can't drive her out, I didn't say she should be thrown away."
Gretel
"There would be no value in that, at least she should be food for the stray dogs."
Scarlet
"Gretel, Don't say things like that."
Scarlet
"If a person is in trouble in the Grimm territory you should help them."
Hansel
"Oh, oh, oh, oh
You two are fighting."
Hansel
"It's night, sending her out now would be a lot of trouble right?
"Therefore we should just agree with Scarlet, for now, I guess, Gretel."
Gretel
"hmph"
Hansel
"Oh
Wait for me Gretel~"
Fuka
"Ah!
Fuka
"They all left?"
Scarlet
"You don't have to worry about her attitude. She's always like that with an enemy."
Scarlet
"...Miss Fuka."
Fuka
"﹒﹒﹒"
Fuka
"Ah... Yes?"
Fuka
"Sorry for being slow. I'm not accustomed to my name yet..."
'what happened?' She tilted her head.
Scarlet
"I'm leaving as well.
Good evening, Please rest here."
Scarlet
"Actually, I'd like to give you a bedroom.
But there aren't any rooms like that in this residence.
Fuka
"Tonight..."
Scarlet
"oh. Think about tomorrow, tomorrow."


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Post by Robin Hood on Wed 21 Sep - 4:18

Dialogue Choice
Thank you or Goodnight

~Thank you option~
Fuka
"That's right, tomorrow..."
Fuka
"Thank you Mr. Scarlet."
Scarlet
"Why are you thanking me?"
Fuka
"Surely this is this is our first meeting Mr. Scarlet... Isn't that right?"
Fuka
"And yet you brought me here..."
Scarlet
"It's not that big a deal.
I couldn't just leave you there and return to the mansion."
Fuka
"That was still something.
If I had remained in town, I..."
Fuka
"Really, thank you very much."
Scarlet
"...Don't mention it."
Scarlet
"This is the first time I've come into contact with a person with amnesia.
I'm not sure what to do."
Scarlet
"When you wake up tomorrow, I hope your memory has returned."
Fuka
"Yes..."
Scarlet
"Until then, Goodnight."

~Goodnight option~
Fuka
"Goodnight Mr. Scarlet."
Scarlet
"Yeah..."
Scarlet
"...Ah, That's right."
Fuka
"What is it?"
Scarlet
"Have you had anything to eat since your collapse?"
Scarlet
"I thought you should eat so I brought you some cookies."
Fuka
"Is it okay to eat them now?"
Scarlet
"Yeah... But I don't think it's enough."
Scarlet
"I'll be sure to have something prepared for you at tomorrow's breakfast.
Until then, please endure for this evening."
Fuka
"Yes. Thank you, Mr. Scarlet."

~Back to common dialogue
Fuka
"Mr. Scarlet, Mr. Hansel, Miss Gretel..."
Fuka
"Mr. Ceasar... Mafia... Grimm..."
She'd met these people.
Learned their names, so to speak,
Fuka
(﹒﹒﹒Not one that rings a bell.)
Fuka
"None of the things around me either."
Where did she grow up, where was she from?
What reason was there for Caesar to be chasing her?
Fuka
(I hope that I will understand tomorrow.)
Fuka
"I hope that I understand."

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Post by Robin Hood on Wed 21 Sep - 5:16

——————————————Scene Change———————————————

Hansel
"Hey, Scarlet"
Scarlet
"... How's Gretel?"
Hansel
"She's sleeping. It's not strange since tomorrow will come soon."
Scarlet
"Yeah, that's true."
Hansel
"By the way, why did you pick up that child?"
Hansel
"If she's from Oz or Anderson thing are going get dicey eh?"
Hansel
"Especially if she's from Oz
Then we'll have to deal with Kyrie here."
Scarlet
"That... is a possibility. I didn't really think about it."
Hansel
"Why not?"
Scarlet
"Because there was no family brand."
Hansel
"Oh, Has she been checked then?"
Scarlet
"Only her wrists. Because women often tend to put the brand on their wrist."
Hansel
"You need to check more than her wrists."
Scarlet
"Usually, wouldn't they just say?"
Scarlet
"In the case of women, It's tradition for them to put the brand in a place that can be seen without having to remove their clothes."
Hansel
"Yeah, But what if she's from the slums?"
Scarlet
"They are different...
Those clothes, she doesn't seem to be Slum born".
Hansel
"Well, If not the there then...where?"
Scarlet
"I don't know without checking her body."
Scarlet
"And because you and I can't..."
Hansel
"So you want to leave it to Gretel?"
Scarlet
"Yeah. If it's possible. Could you ask her?"
Hansel
"She's going to hate that. But I'll try and persuade her somehow."
Hansel
"Because I'm interested where the child is from and I think it'd be good for Gretel to meet someone."
Scarlet
"Is that so... Thank you, Hansel."
Hansel
"Hehe. A peaceful task!"

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Post by Gretel on Wed 21 Sep - 6:39

——————————————Scene Change———————————————

Fuka
nn...
Fuka
"It's already morning..."
Fuka
(It's very quiet...)
She rises and slowly stands up
Fuka
"Ah..."
She was at a loss for words when she looked out at the scenery out the window.
Fuka
(There's a nice garden I hadn't noticed before.)
Fuka
(I'd like to take a walk through it...
*door click*
Fuka
(---Oh I think someone has come)
Fuka
"Good Morning..."
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒"
Fuka
"Um..."
Fuka
"Good Morning Miss Gretel."
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒﹒﹒﹒"
Fuka
(N,no response)

Dialogue Choice
Greet her once more or Ask her what her business is

~Greet her once more option~
Maybe now that they were in the same space
She should speak about something... But she can't think of what.
Fuka
(Um, Nothing comes to mind...)
Fuka
(Maybe I should greeting her once more.)
She was hopeful that 'Perhaps she just didn't hear me.' She took a deep breath.
Fuka
"Good morning Miss Gretel!"
Gretel
"!"
Gretel
"... What was that shout just now?"
Fuka
Oh, I got a reaction this time
Gretel
"W,what are you laughing at..."
Gretel
"... I'm on to your scheme."
Gretel
"You're trying to break my eardrums."
Fuka
"eh"
Gretel
"You are trying to kill me gradually by continually doing damage, You horrible child...!"
Fuka
"It isn't like that!"
Gretel
"Look, I didn't have to wait for her to raise her voice again."
Gretel
"I hate noisy people
Maybe you can be quiet if you don't want me to stuff a grenade in your mouth."
Fuka
"Y,yes..."
Fuka
(Her glare is painful... I'd better behave.)

~Ask her what her business is option~

Fuka
"Um...Can I help you?"
Gretel
"..tch"
Fuka
(A,and she clicks her tongue)
Fuka
(She might have other business in this room that has nothing to do with me.)
Fuka
(I should be quiet.)

~back to common dialogue

Gretel
"...I'm here because they told me, not because I want to be."
Fuka
"eh"
Gretel
"I'm saying it's not my intention to be here. Got it?"
Fuka
"Yes..."
Without understanding the meaning Fuka finds herself suddenly nodding.
With a deep sigh, Gretel approached her.
And roughly dropped a paper bag to the floor in front of her.
Fuka
"Um... What is that bag for?"
Gretel
"No questions."
Fuka
"S, sorry..."
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒"
After glaring at Fuka, Gretel reached into the paper bag
And pulled out what looked like cloth from within.
Fuka
"Clothes...?"
Gretel
"Put this on. Because your clothes are dirty."
Fuka
"You brought me clothes?"
Gretel
"You don't need to identify it. Just take it."
Fuka
"Y, yes.Thank you Miss Gretel."
Gretel
"Hurry up."
Fuka
"Yes."
Fuka
(Oh... They're nice clothes.)
Fuka
"Um... Do you also want me to wear this necklace?"
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒"
Fuka
"G,given that you put it in here you must want me to wear it? right..."
Fuka
(I don't want to offend Miss Gretel.
I'd better change quickly.)
Fuka
"﹒﹒﹒"
Fuka
"... Um"
Gretel
"What?"
Fuka
"It's a little difficult to change when you are staring at me..."
Gretel
"Don't watch you? How egotistical you are eh?"
Gretel
"If you want you can go hang yourself on the curtain over there and die.
It faces the other way."
Fuka
"I don't want to do that."
Gretel
"Then I guess you'll have to put up with it."
Fuka
"I understand..."
Fuka
(After, this...)
Fuka
"...done!"
Gretel
"Sigh... You took too much time to change your clothes.
I thought the day was over."
Gretel
"Hey, let's go."
Fuka
"Go, where--?"
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒"
Fuka
(She's glaring at me)
It seemed better when she didn't say unnecessary things.
She swallowed her words.
Fuka
"I, I will follow..."
Gretel
"Good."
Gretel began to leave the room
Fuka ran to catch up and noticed a mirror reflecting in her eyes.
Fuka
(These clothes are nice.)
Though all she did was change her clothes
She felt like a brand new person.
Fuka
(...But I don't know what my "usual self" is.)
After one night she had hoped to remember something but there was no result.
As with yesterday her memories were still missing
Gretel
"... Wait."
Fuka
"!"
Gretel
"You, what are you up too?
If you're not there when I look back..."
Fuka
"S,sorry.
I was just thinking how nice these clothes are."
Gretel
"...They are not particularly great clothes."
Fuka
"I disagree.
Look at the ribbon on the sleeve!"
Gretel
"I don't need an explanation.
Just come quickly, girl."
Fuka
"Y,yes."

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Post by Gretel on Mon 26 Sep - 18:59

Fuka
(This place...)
After look back and around the mansion, she was convinced.
Fuka
(This is the same garden I saw from that room...)
She was filled with emotion at getting to walk around, this was her dream come true,
as she followed behind Gretel
Hansel
"Oh Hey!"
Fuka
"Ah... Mr. Hansel, Mr. Scarlet."
Hansel and Scarlet were in the center of a little open place in the garden.
A big red cloth was spread on the ground and the two were seated facing each other.
Scarlet
"Good morning Miss Fuka. Did you sleep well?"
Fuka
"Yes, I did, thanks to you."
Scarlet
"That's Good. I'm glad."
Scarlet
"We were just about to eat breakfast. Please join us."
Fuka
"Thank you."
Gretel had already taken a seat right beside Hansel
So Fuka sat down next to Scarlet in the same way
Hansel
"Fuka baby, Those clothes look great, they suit you!
Looking good! ♪"
Fuka
"Th, Thank you."
Scarlet
"I was waiting to see what Gretel choose for you."
Gretel
"Don't get the wrong idea. This isn't my hobby."
Gretel
"Just some clothes that I got from some people in our territory that I hadn't finished throwing out."
Fuka
"Is that so?"
Scarlet
"Is the size a problem?"
Fuka
"Nope. It fits very well."
Scarlet
"I see. That's good."
Scarlet said "here"
and offered Fuka some bread wrapped in paper.
She looked as Scarlet as she took it.
Scarlet
"... What is it?"
Fuka
"Mr. Scarlet
You clothes are boyish aren't they?"
Scarlet
"...boyish..."
Scarlet
"You don't think that I am..."
Scarlet
"You don't think that I am a woman...?"
Fuka
"Eh"
Fuka dropped the bread from her hand.
Fuka
"You're not!?"
Scarlet
"Of course I'm not. I am a man!
How could you make this mistake?"
Fuka
"Well... You are small and you have such a pretty face..."
Fuka
"I can't really see the other parts that would show you to be a girl."
Scarlet
"Jeez...
I admit that my face is small... I do have a baby face."
Scalet
"But I am a man.
Please be more careful in the future."
Fuka
"Y,yes... Sorry."
Fuka
(I didn't notice...
I must be a fool for thinking he was a woman.)
Fuka
"...Umm. Mr. Hansel?"
Hansel
"Yeah?"
Fuka
"Mr. Hansel, You are a man... aren't you?"
Hansel
"Absolutely. It would be kind of strange if women looked like me."
Hansel
"Come to think of it,
Have you remembered anybody? Where you able to remember anything?"
Fuka
"It still entirely blank....
Fuka
"I still don't even remember my real name."
Scarlet
"Well... Gretel, was there any mark?"
Gretel
"There was not."
Fuka
"Mark?"
Hansel
"Yeah, everyone who lives in this town,
They all put the mark of their family somewhere on their bodies."
He rolled up the sleeve of his left hand 'like this'
Hansel
"This apple marks us as part of the Grimm Family, however-"
Gretel
"The child doesn't have one.
Not Grimm...or any other family."
Fuka
"...ah!"
Fuka
"I see. I think I'm starting to understand."
Gretel
"What are you starting to understand?"
Fuka
"Miss Gretel, you watched me change to be sure there was no mark on me right?"
Gretel
"...Your 'I figured it out' face is disgusting."
Gretel
"It's clear that I have a motive, isn't it?
It's not like I had a choice in watching you change."
Gretel
"... So. What are we doing with this child? Are we taking her?"
Scarlet
"Yes. As scheduled."
Fuka
"Where are we going?"
Gretel
To hell.
Fuka
"Eh?"
Gretel
"To where a needle is thrust into your body mercilessly, to drive away death with fluids, a sharp pain and then bloodshed...
How could one not think of this place as hell... hehehe."
Fuka
"﹒﹒﹒"
Scarlet
"There is nothing to be frightened of. We are just going to the clinic."
Scarlet
"Gretel, you're description is too disturbing."
Gretel
"But it's the truth.
... I can't wait to see the look on your face when you see hell's gatekeeper."
Fuka
"G,gatekeeper...?"
Scarlet
"You'll understand soon enough.
Finish your breakfast quickly, we have a busy day ahead of us."
Fuka
"Y,yes."
Fuka
(Should I be looking forward to it or frightened?)

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Post by Robin Hood on Tue 27 Sep - 2:26

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Hansel
"Here. Eat this and this."
Gretel
"Hansel, she's going to overeat."
Hansel
"But Gretel's baked bread is just too good. Haha."
Fuka
"You made this bread Miss Gretel?"
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒"
She didn't reply, but merely glared at her.
In a small voice, Fuka said that "it was delicious."
Scarlet
"I'm sorry to have kept you three waiting."
Fuka
"Mr. Scarlet."
Gretel
"You're late. What the hell were you doing?"
Scarlet
"A carrier pigeon had come. I was verifying the letter."
Scarlet
"Well then, let's go."

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Fuka
"Here is the territory of the Grimm family..."
The scenery she'd run through yesterday. She recognized them.
Scarlet
"The Grimm territory is everywhere the green bricks touches.
It's pretty simple to remember."
Scarlet
"Over there is the mansion
And opposite it, over there--"

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Fuka
"Woah. A big tower...!"
Gretel
"Don't be stupid.
It's just an ordinary tower, nothing to be inspired by."
Fuka
"Even so, It's so large."
With bright eyes, Fuka looked the tower over from bottom to top.
Fuka
"It's so much taller than me...,
It's like it connected to the sky."
???
"Haha. I guess you could say that."
Fuka
"Eh."
Fuka
"And you are...?"
Scarlet
"Sou, Don't just come up and start a conversation suddenly."
Soh
"Haha. Sorry, sorry."
Soh
"You're the "girl without memories" Sukasuka was talking about."
Fuka
"Sukasuka..."
Scarlet
"My nickname it seems... Though I don't acknowledge it."
Soh
"But, Sukasuka name is too long, it's hard to remember."
Soh
"I'm Sou. You can find me here running a stall sometimes."
Fuka
"So I see. I'm..."
Fuka
(My, name....)
Soh
"Huh, Is something the matter?"
Fuka
"N,no. Nothing."
Fuka
"I'm Fuka."
Her name--, It is an uncomfortable feeling to not have that familiarity of the memory of her name.
Fuka
(My real name, I want to remember it properly...)
Soh
"Is that so? Fuka... huh. That's a very lovely name."
Soh
"Pleased to meet you Fuka!"
With a friendly grin and a laugh, Sou offered his hand to Fuka.
Even though Fuka was confused she took his hand.
Gretel
"Airheaded Trashy Dog, to go that far just because you can.
We don't have the time to waste talking with you."
Soh
"Oh, Is that so?"
Hansel
"Yeah. Fuka's going to be examined by the doctor. That's the plan for now."
Soh
"Doctor... Oh, You're going to the clinic?"
Soh
"Darn
I really wanted to talk to you a little more, what a shame!"
Soh
"See you later Fuka. Next time we meet I hope we have more time to talk."
Fuka
"Me too. Good-bye, Mr. Sou."
Fuka
"... Mr. Sou is a nice person, isn't he?
Scarlet
"Yeah, He's pretty easy to speak to, but he is..."
Fuka
"He is...?"
Scarlet
"... It's nothing
Come, Let's go."

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Post by Robin Hood on Tue 27 Sep - 19:03

Scarlet
"Good-day"
???
"Ah, Here at last."
Fuka
"!"
???
"I see, you must be the child in question."
Fuka
"Y,you are..."
???
"hm?"
Fuka
"Are you the keeper of hell...?"
???
"﹒﹒﹒"
???
"Hansel and Gretel is this your doing?"
Hansel
"Haha. The lone culprit is Gretel this time."
???
"Really.
Gretel, Please don't say strange things."
Gretel
"I'm not a bad person. I only told the truth."
Gretel
"Since the life and death of a person is decided here by your abilities.
I believe "Watchdog of hell" was fitting title."
???
"...Well, what do I care what you call me."
Robin Hood
"I'm Robin Hood and I'm the town doctor."
Fuka
"Mr.Robin Hood..."
"Um, I'm--"
Robin Hood
"Fuka, right? I know who you are."
Robin Hood
"There was a report last night. I am told that you have no memories at all, correct?"
Fuka
"Yes. That is true."
Scarlet
"Doctor, will you be able to heal her?"
Robin Hood
"It is impossible right now. As I do not know the reasons why or what is causing it."
Gretel
"We call you specifically to heal her and you say you can do nothing? You're so incompetent."
Robin Hood
"I didn't say this was a fool's errand.
I can't cure the amnesia but I can investigate to see if it is caused by a disease."
Robin Hood
"It is my job to take care of the residents of this town.
So, Shall we begin?"
Fuka
"Yes, Lets."
Robin Hood
"ah, Please don't be so tense,
Just relax."
Hansel
"So? Have you found what is to blame?"
Robin Hood
"No, nothing yet. But I've only just started."
Gretel
"Hurry it up. You quack of a doctor."
Robin Hood
"﹒﹒﹒All of you, need to be silent. I can't work with all this noise."
Hansel
"How about now? I'm getting tired of waiting."
Robin Hood
"It's still too early... Scarlet."
Scarlet
"Yes. We'll wait outside."
Scarlet
"Let's go you two."
Hansel
"Sure, sure~"
Robin Hood
"﹒﹒﹒Sigh. Finally some peace and quiet.
I can't stand how noisy they are."
Fuka
"Are they always like that?"
Robin Hood
"Yeah, Hansel and Gretel are dangerous twins who like to fight for superiority among the other families."
Robin Hood
"﹒﹒﹒Do you intend to join the Grimm family?"
Fuka
"Join?"
Robin Hood
"Perhaps a thought for the future.
but if you have no memories, you also don't remember where you used to live?"
Robin Hood
"Even if you begin a new life, being independent will be difficult."
Fuka
"...That's true, isn't it?"
Fuka
(She'd been relying on the others up until now, she hadn't put much thought into it herself.)
Naturally,
The Grimm family had been taking care of her up until now.
Fuka
"If you think it'd be alright, I'd like to stay with Mr.Scarlet and the others for a little while longer."
Fuka
"Because I don't know the town at all.
And I think it would be a little lonely all by myself."
Robin Hood
"Well now... Is that so?"
They finished up the examination
Robin Hood closed the patient's chart.
Robin Hood
"Thank you for your hard work.
After that brief examination, I've determined you to be in good health."
Fuka
"Oh, okay. I'm glad..."
Robin Hood
"Now,
The human body is a fragile thing. It can deteriorate if you don't take care of it."
Robin Hood
"If anything comes up, please feel free to visit me anytime."
Fuka
"Okay!"

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Hansel
"Oh, She's back, she's back!"
Fuka
"Sorry to have kept you waiting."
Scarlet
"No, That's--"
Gretel
"You should be. I got so bored I thought I was going to throw up."
Scarlet
"Gretel..."
Gretel
"What? This is a waste of my holidays. I should be allowed to complain a little."
Gretel
"Look, I'm tired of lingering around here. I'm leaving."
Scarlet
"I feel like it wouldn't be a "little" complaining."
Hansel
"Ah, Well, in Gretel's case
That's just the way she is with people. That was practically praise!"
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒Yeah, but even so"
Scarlet
"Miss Fuka what were the results of the examination?"
Fuka
"I'm good it seems."
Scarlet
"Is that so? I'm glad to hear it."
Scarlet
"... Well we are pressed for time, we should hurry up a bit."
Fuka
"Where are we off to next?"
Hansel
"Anywhere is good. Well,well Let's go!"

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Post by Gretel on Sat 1 Oct - 19:55

Fuka
"So this is..."
Scarlet
"This is the meeting place for the mafia."
Fuka
"Mafia...?"
Scarlet
"That's right. This is the place where we gather to have important discussions and make decisions."
???
"——It's a troublesome rule, to tell you the truth."
Fuka
"!"
Orange-haired man.
"That was rude of me to interrupt. Sorry, I kept you waiting, Scarlet."
Scarlet
"It's alright. We are doing this on a Sunday after all."
Green-haired man
"Precisely!
Don't you know we are busy people unlike you, Right Axel?"
Axel
"﹒﹒﹒Who knows."
Green-haired man
"How impolite. Day after day you do no more than continuously patrol our territory, yet you don't bother to understand my business."
Axel
"................. Despicable."
The man with green hair turned his eyes towards Fuka smiling pleasantly.
Green-haired man.
"I have not seen this face before.
That means you must be our rumored 'Jane Doe'"
Fuka
"You are..."
Kyrie
"I am the Oz family consigliere, Kyrie"
Fuka
"Consigli...?"
Kyrie
"Consigliere. Pleased to make your acquaintance."
Kyrie
"Over here with the orange hair and the stupid face is the Oz Don Caramia.
And the moron with the glasses is our caporegime, Axel."
Caramia
"Stupid face..."
Axel
"Moron..."
Kyrie
"I speak only the truth."
Fuka
(Th, this guy has an amazingly malicious tongue.)
Caramia
"How could you say that in front of this child we don't know. Jeez..."
Caramia
"Again, I am Caramia.
I'm the Don of the Oz family."
Caramia
"And you name is Miss?"
Fuka
"Umm... It's Fuka."
Kyrie
"Fuka..."
Axel
"What is it, Kyrie?"
Kyrie
"﹒﹒﹒Nothing.
I just find it strange how a girl without any memories has a name.
Scarlet
"It's just a temporary name. For convenience."
Kyrie
"I see... On to business?"
Scarlet
"I only wanted to speak with Mr. Caramia..."
Kyrie
"Well, that's too bad.
I am the adviser, my presence can't be avoided.
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒Is that so?"
Scarlet
"Yesterday afternoon, This girl was chased by Ceasar of the wolf gang and came under our protection."
Scarlet
"After examining her, she was found to have no mark of the mafia nor does she have any memories."
Scarlet
"In this case, I was curious on how we should proceed?
I thought I should get your opinion."
Caramia
"I see. I——"
Kyrie
"If she is useful and a capable person, mark her as one of yours for your territory.
Otherwise, throw her in the slums."
Caramia
"﹒﹒﹒Kyrie, don't interrupt me."
Kyrie
"It's no problem. I was saving them from whatever boring thing you were going to say"
Kyrie
"'Take care of her until her memory returns', something along those lines I imagine?
Caramia
"...I don't need you to speak for me, thank you."
Caramia
"I don't think that it's right to change your mind if you've already offered to help.
If it was me, I'd take care of her until I was convinced she'd be alright."
Scarlet
"I thought so as well, well then..."
Kyrie
"Since the Grimm Family is extremely destitute,
Can you even afford to add another girl so thoughtlessly?"
Kyrie
"If you find you are not alright, please rely on me.
I will lend you the money. With ample interest of course."
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒Well aside from Kyrie's comments, It gives me peace of mind to know you think the same, Mr. Caramia."
Axel
"﹒﹒﹒﹒﹒﹒So that means?"
Scarlet
"Mr. Caramia and I are of the same mind.
I intend to protect her until her identity is ascertained."
Scarlet
"Since I am just a caporegime without a lot of confidence
I wanted to know how Mr. Caramia would handle it."
Kyrie
"Though we are a different family and a hostile one at that."
Scarlet
"Yeah. I find Mr. Caramia to be sincere in his words."
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒However I cannot say the same for Kyrie."
Kyrie
"You talk too much. Boy of the red hood."
Scarlet
"Don't call me boy!"
Kyrie
"hehe. I did you a discourtesy.
As an apology, I offer you one piece of advice".
Kyrie
"If you've decided to formally protect her you should inform the other families.
Better than to have it cause trouble in the future."
Scarlet
"Yeah. I'll do that."
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒Well, that was my only business.
Sorry to make you come out all this way."
Caramia
"That's okay.
We were coming to meet Miss Kitty anyway."
Fuka
"Miss Kitty...?"
Caramia
Yeah, You don't know the young lady?
Pashet is the Don of the Boots Family. She's the master of this castle."
Caramia
"She has tails and ears like a cat.
She's not here but she's a pretty interesting person."
Fuka
"Ears like a cat... I want to meet her."
Caramia
"That's right.
Scarlet, In that case, why don't you have her come meet Pashet now?"
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒No, perhaps another time.
We've kept Hansel and Gretel waiting out front."
Scarlet
"We'll have her properly introduced another day. For now, we're going home."
Fuka
"I understand."
Scarlet
"Well then, please excuse us."
Fuka
"Goodbye
Mr. Caramia, Mr. Kyrie, Mr. Axel."
Caramia
"Yeah, It was nice meeting you."

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Post by Gretel on Sun 2 Oct - 1:04

Hansel
"Hey, you two!"
Fuka
"Mr. Hansel, Miss Gretel."
Hansel
"Scarlet, What did Caramia have to say?"
Scarlet
"That I should protect her.
Therefore we had the same opinion——"
Gretel
"So we're living with this girl for good now? Unbelievable..."
Fuka
"Miss Gretel..."
Gretel
"What you're sad, and that means I have to live with you?"
Hansel
"Three people become four?"
It'll be fun Gretel!"
Gretel
"Hansel, did you hear me at all? Were you even listening? You're the worst."
Hansel
"But the house might become more lively? I think we should give her a warm welcome."
Gretel
"A big nuisance is what it sounds like to me. I prefer the quiet anyway."
Gretel
"Little girl!"
Fuka
"Y,yes."
Gretel
"﹒﹒﹒"
Gretel
"If you try to interfere with me.
I will wind a grenade in your hair and observe it from a distance."
Gretel
"It's almost delivery time... Let's go, Hansel."
Hansel
"Sure!
Bye Scarlet, Fuka-baby. Later!"
Scarlet
"Ah, right work. Do your best."
Scarlet
"After a short rest, I'll take you around town.
There are probably many things you should be told.
Fuka
"Yes... Um"
Scarlet
"What is it?"
Fuka
"Thank you for everything since yesterday."
Fuka
"I, I should say thank you right..."
Scarlet
"Your thanks isn't necessary.
I couldn't ignore you when you were in trouble."
Scarlet
"﹒﹒﹒It's like a habit I suppose.
It's not as though I dislike meddling."
Fuka
"Is that so?
Well, I hope I'm not too much of a nuisance."
Scarlet
"That's not something I think you need to worry about.
I know someone who is a lot more trouble."
Scarlet
"——Oh, yes.
If you're up to the task I had a request of you.
Fuka
"Yes, what is it?"
Scar;et
"Um... Could you try and get along with Gretel? You don't have to do this as a favor to me."
Fuka
"Miss Gretel?"
Scarlet
"Yeah, You're aware of her disposition? There isn't anyone who is her friend."
Scarlet
"I always thought it'd be good if she had a friend who was also a girl.
Therefore, If you could..."
Fuka
"Sure, I'd be delighted too."
Scarlet
"Really? I think it requires a lot of patience... is that alright?"
Fuka
"It'll be okay. Please leave it to me."
Scarlet
"I don't know where your self-confidence comes from but... Yeah, I'll leave it to you."
Scarlet
"Thanks for taking care of us, Miss Fuka."
Fuka
"Of course!"

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